The first line sucked me in, but the rest of the prose didn't live up to it. The imagery was fairly good, the dialogue wasn't pushing the story quite hard enough, but really, the first line was so good the rest felt like a let down, even though there's nothing that stands out as broken spots. I think this would work better for me if you ran through and did line editing, making the prose as taut as possible. I feel like you did a good job with the plot, I think rain and a funeral are a little cliche, but it didn't feel cliche here.
best dialogue was about the umbrella. I almost wish you'd kept it going a little more as they trudged. This is one of the better prose dd's I have seen this year.